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J. Janks
04-05-2005, 08:07 AM
“What is Gonna be the Sound?”

A long scar: across this belly. Run a finger over it.
Feel the warm plane, the rhythms of this body,
and learn them well.

This form collects small droplets. There is a shudder.
Guide your timid hands across my limbs--
bring down these walls.

You are the playmate, my silly friend. Let’s create a game.
In each other we mimic our moves,
pitted against whose tale.

Copyright (c) '05 David R C.

Hot Noncing
04-06-2005, 09:11 AM
What rubbish

MeinFuhrer³
04-06-2005, 09:22 AM
Wow, Hot Noncing, you seem really familiar and yea, thats fucking shit

Drake McCloud
04-06-2005, 11:05 AM
*Chuckles* Heh heh, sounds fun :yah:

RoseRose
04-06-2005, 12:53 PM
I like it... not like what I usually like, but I thought it was good.

J. Janks
04-07-2005, 09:23 PM
*faces Drake*

Yeah, it is fun if you're the one on the receiving end. :p

*turns to Rose*

This is kind of an erotic poem with more of an emphasis of foreplay. Whether you're in to that stuff or not, that's you. Writing about sensuous (emotional) and sensual (physical) things is fun. :p